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Title: Antiphony
Author: opalmatrix
Warnings: Gojyo's mouth
Pairing(s): n/a
Spoilers: Nothing much. The Gojyo verse was directly inspired by the end of the scene at the site of the Centipede King's fortress in "Be There."
Notes: Written for saiyuki_time prompt #15 Sense of Hearing. Time allowed: any. Form required: Haiku. Time taken: 12 minutes
Summary: .

Sanzo

I have my mission.
But his rich voice makes me think
that it's not enough.

Gojyo

That damned bitchy monk!
His golden voice, chanting, makes
me his acolyte.

 

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purpleicicles
Jul. 1st, 2008 02:19 pm (UTC)
Mmmm, nice focus on voices - Gojyo's one especially made me shiver with delight! ^___^
opalmatrix
Jul. 9th, 2008 01:20 am (UTC)

Thanks - I'm glad it worked! I love "Be There," and the way that horrible evening resolves, with Gojyo practically ordering Sanzo to "chant a sutra or something, man" - and then getting completely blown away by the result - is one of the things that first made me realize what a great series this is.

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opalmatrix
Jul. 9th, 2008 01:22 am (UTC)

Awww, thanks!! The Sanzo one came fairly easily, but I wrestled with the Gojyo one, even thought the scene was vivid in my memory. Like pruning my brain into a bansai tree ... .

louiselux
Jul. 3rd, 2008 03:06 pm (UTC)
Oooh, I really love how they answer each other, and so full of character too!
opalmatrix
Jul. 9th, 2008 01:25 am (UTC)

> wipes forehead with relief <

Thanks! I got worried when I started reading everyone else's, because mine aren't very poetic. But the Sanzo one just sort of came on its own, and then I remembered the "can't you chant a sutra or something" bit in "Be There," and the Gojyo became the answer.

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